🚩 Sugar Set Me Free — Some More, Sugar Please 🙏

Extra-Large, Double-Cream, Double-Sugar… Double-Double, Please!

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🎶 God is so good, He’s so good to me! 🎶

Grace, Truth, Faith, and Sweet Sugar,

and a Red5 Flagpole —

That’s all I need.

They all set me free!

(Coffee, freedom, and morning sunlight… wait… sip… breathe…)

Look up: a biplane arcs across the sky,

its long banner trailing behind —

echoing the Red5 Flagpole,

waving the words:

“Sugar Set Me Free — Some More, Sugar, Please”

(and a subtle nod to www.eastwindpoems.site)

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Home. Sweet Beach Home.

Where Baby Godzilla lounges in the surf,

and dragonlings spiral past sunlit waves,

while words wake you like stardust on the sea.

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(Coffee buzz rising… body warming… sun on skin… heart racing…)

Patience stretched like a balloon —

at a Walmart register,

making five calls, ten calls, his bank, blah, blah, blah…

It shouldn’t be this hard.

You either got it or you don’t.

Go on and get home!

Pop!

⚡️

Hotshot energy peaks… Bingo!

(…then extinguish the fire with a cold shower — refresh, reset, rise again.)

Hotshot Thunder. ⚡️

Make it back safe.

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🎬 Performance / Storyboard Notes

Pacing:

Slow and reflective during coffee + beach imagery.

Fast and playful during nostalgia, Hotshot energy, and “Bingo!” moment.

Pauses & Emphasis:

1–2 beat pauses on key lines: Red5 Flagpole, Bingo!, Hotshot Thunder.

Elongate words for rhythm: “Wait… sip… breathe…”

Visual Cues for Video or Stage:

Biplane/banner: sweeps across sky behind Red5 Flagpole.

Baby Godzilla & dragonlings: animate the beach scene.

Balloon-pop metaphor: visualize patience-stretching lines.

Audience Takeaway:

Nostalgia + whimsical fantasy + coffee energy + universal frustrations → playful, relatable, emotionally engaging.

Closing on Hotshot Thunder → Make it back safe leaves the audience grounded, energized, and smiling.