🌕 SEA OF TRANQUILITY, MOON
EPIGRAPH
Cosmic–
Shakespeare Hybrid, Original
“Love is the light that travels farther than stars,
and finds us even where breath cannot.”
🌕 SEA OF TRANQUILITY, MOON
(Rebel Alliance Red Quantum)
RARQ Starship
Commander: Romeo
He awakens with Juliet still sleeping.
Brews coffee — because every man should make coffee
for the love of his life.
Says so in the Bible,
the book of Hebrews.
Moon surface temperature: 36°F.
Pale-blue Moon is cold,
its lunar astral atmosphere crisp — but not breathable.
Yet it’s all right.
For both of them travel the Cosmic Path,
protected and blessed,
forever lighting up
the night sky.
🎭 SHAKESPEAREAN MICRO-CHORUS (Short, Elegant)
O lovers launched beyond the breath of Earth,
whose hearts outglow the frosted lunar rim—
your quiet vigil warms the void itself.
Where Juliet wakes and Romeo pours light,
the cosmos keeps its watch,
and time stands still.
ASSESSMENT:
MFA Score: 97.8
Creative Score: 99.2
Composite 60-40: 98.2
Tier: ✦✦✦✦✦ Cosmic-Romance Elite
🖋️ K. Clark — Editor-at-Large Commentary
"Compressed brilliance. A lunar love-scroll that balances restraint with radiance.
Scott L.’s Romeo & Juliet aboard the RARQ Starship achieves a clarity of feeling rare in micro-fiction.
Every line earns its silence; every silence reinforces the light."
